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I wrote this for a friend sometime ago. [05 Aug 2004|10:48pm]
Now it is time for you
to heal the wounds that run deep
to realize you are someone
not a shadow of a person
to be ignored and abused
now is the time to see
that you are a woman
strong and free
now is the time to love the man
as he once was
and pity the man he is now
now is the time for you
for your loving nature
to be set free
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Desire [23 Jul 2003|10:55pm]
I come to you, dressed in sexy lingerie and a long over coat. Standing before you as you take my coat off. I step forward into your embrace, kissing you deeply and passionately. Looking into your eyes, I unbutton your shirt and slowly strip it from your hot sexy body. Kneeling, I unbutton your pants, slowly pull them down from your hips. As you step out of them, I caress and stroke your legs and ass. Slowly I bring my warm hands up to your hard manhood, caressing you, stroking you. Bringing my full red lips closer to your rigid and hot member. I flick the tip with my tongue, then slowly take your full length into my mouth. Sucking gently, flicking my tongue down the whole length as I move up and down you. I look up at you, you are watching me with passion filled eyes, mine are burning bright with need and concupiscence for you. Slowly I stand before you again, our lips meet and our tongues mate. Leading you to the bed, I pull you down next to me. Your hands wander over my hot flesh, I moan with unreleased hunger. I lay you on your back and straddle you, moving up to your face so you may pleasure me and taste of my wetness and desire for you. Feeling your tongue and mouth work their magic, I climb ever closer to release. Suddenly cumming hard and fast. I move down your body, leaning over I kiss you and taste myself upon your lips. Still kissing you, I position myself and slowly lower my hips, drawing you into my hot wetness. Sitting up I rock back and forth at first then moving with abandon, I look down at you as you caress my large breasts moaning as I get closer to my second orgasm. I lean over to kiss you as I cum, our tongues dancing together, like the lower half of our bodies. We switch positions, I have you take me from behind. You grab my ass as you drive into me, hard. Closer we come to completion, moaning and fierce whispers escape from our lips. As I cum, my muscles tighten around you, squeezing you as you release your seed deep inside of me. Collapsing from sated desire, we cuddle close kissing and stroking each other lightly, till we fall asleep.
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Jaded [27 Jun 2003|02:05am]
Loathing is what I feel when you are near
Hatred is what I experience when you are close

You ripped my heart from my breast
You stomped it into the ground

Not caring that I was dying
Not caring that I was alone

I was so in love with you
You were my whole world

I will never forgive you for breaking my heart
I will never forget what you have done to me

Soon I will form a bond with someone worthy
I will give my heart to him, you will be pushed back
But not forgotten

The pain I went through will not be for nothing
I will learn from my mistakes
I will know a con artist when I see one
I will know not to give my heart so freely next time

You have jaded my heart, my soul
From giving so freely again
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Your Return [27 Jun 2003|02:03am]
Winds whipping across my face
As I stand on the cliffs edge
Looking out upon the roiling ocean
I contemplate the world around me

The beauty of the violent sea
Moves me deeply
I think of emotions roiling and boiling
Within my breast

Wanting to be near you
I cast my eyes across the ocean
Looking for sight of your ship
I wait for you to come home to me

I long for the day when we will be together
So that I might hold you in my arms
And whisper in you ear
How much I have missed you

I wait on the cliff for you to return to me
So that I might show you in the night
How much I have missed you
And how much I desire you

So the wind and the rough seas
Are my companions till your return
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No Longer [27 Jun 2003|02:00am]
Who are you to treat me this way
Who do you think you are
To shatter my dreams
To break my trust

I thought you were the one
I thought you were the only one for me

I don't have to take this from you
I don't have to be treated this way
I wont stand for it any more
You no longer have my heart

I thought you were different
I thought you were kind

You shattered those illusions
As fully as a broken mirror
I see you now for who you are
I see the corrupt soul that you have

You turned out no better than the rest
You have no kindness in you

How you fooled me
How I loved you
No longer
I am free of you
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Standing Alone [27 Jun 2003|01:51am]
Standing alone
Vast oceans before me
Flowing
Growing
With the sands of time
Running out
Of time
To say
The words
Of the
Heart
Beating
Sounds of the blood
Rushing through
Veins
Of gold
Deep in the earth
Close to
The center
Circling
Back
To standing alone
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Arousing poems [27 Jun 2003|01:26am]
My flames reach out
Touching your skin
Searing your flesh
With the heat that they bring

Our flames mingle
And entwine
Pulling us closer to each other
Skin tingling
Pulses racing

Touching, we come together
In a blaze of passion
Flames slowly
Extinguishing

Sated we lay
Together panting
Our mutual satisfaction

***************************

petals falling
away
stripping me
bare

floating to
the floor
revealing
the splendor
of naked
flesh

relishing the
feel of
your eyes
roaming
my flesh

closer
I come
to the bed
where you
lay waiting

silky flesh
meeting
silky flesh

sparks flying
as our
passion
is unleashed

***************

slippery skin
sliding

fire heats
my loins
passion burns
in my veins

my fingers
caressing
your skin
lower they
travel finding
the core
of your
passion

kissing you
the whole
while
enjoying the
feel of
our mating
tongues

you start
the fire
and put
out the
blaze that
is my lust
for you

***************

a soft sigh escaping
her parted lips
she welcomes his
embrace, eagerly

running her hands
upon his body
she roams the planes
of his magnificent build

feeling his readiness
she touches him
softly upon the lips
and whispers against
his mouth, she is his

wanting to love
him fully, she opens
totally, exposing
her softness
for him to explore
as she in turn
explores his hardness

they come together
in soft sighs and
low moans

swiftly, building together
the rhythm of nature
slowly climbing
the heights
of pleasure
dancing together
the dance of love
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Thinking of You [27 Jun 2003|01:22am]
Rain drops falling gently upon my face
To intermingle with the tears I have shed

Tears shed thinking of you
And the joys you brought to many

You shall forever live in our hearts
And our minds, the way you were




Written for my nephew, whose life was claimed too early.
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You Are There [27 Jun 2003|01:22am]
When sadness calls
You are there
When depression settles in
You are there
To make things happy
To make things bright
When loneliness comes calling
You are there to drive it away
You chase away all my fears
You make me laugh
You hold my secrets close to your heart
You are all I've ever wanted
You are my friend and lover
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Untitled [27 Jun 2003|01:18am]
Standing upon the bow
Of this beautiful ship
With the wind caressing my skin
With its gentle touch
The warm sun
Touching me lightly
In its warming embrace
The sea smells deeply of
The salt contained within

Absorbing all these things
As I think of you
Waiting for me
Upon a distant shore

We have been apart for to long
I make this trip
Wanting to see your face
To see the love you have for me
Written upon it

Soon my love
I shall embrace you
Hold you tightly in my arms
And never let you go
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My Heart [27 Jun 2003|01:17am]
My heart was yours to hold
Gently in your hands
Yet you were careless
And let it drop

You were supposed to keep it safe
Next to your own heart
So that they may beat in unison
But it slipped through your fingers

Now my heart belongs to another
It is cared for, held close
This time it wont slip
Your loss, his gain

For now I am happy
I find I did not need you
You are now a passing thought
If you are a thought at all
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Queen of Darkness [27 Jun 2003|01:06am]
The devil's bride
The underworld's pride
Evil in its purest form
Down in the devil's dorm

With breath of fire
Born from my sire
A kiss of death
Will steal your breath

Kiss me my sweet
It will be a treat
To taste of you
Before you are blue

The kiss will seal your doom
In my darkened room
Close the door
You don't know what you are in for
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How I Feel About You [27 Jun 2003|01:03am]
I know how I feel about you
I know that you are the only one for me
I know the feelings you stir inside me
You make me feel alive and vibrant

Love of mine, you are the only one for me
You will forever be in my heart
Till the day that my soul is released from my body
Then we will be joined forever in everlasting harmony


Loving forever, in everlasting peace
I will rest when you are near my heart


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Falling [27 Jun 2003|01:00am]
Swiftly falling into your embrace
Drowning in your eyes
Warmth suffusing my bones
Fire spreading through my veins

Passion consuming me
Love guiding me
Lust driving me
Friendship holding me

Coming together
We are as one
Staying together
We are complete
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Random Thoughts [26 Jun 2003|11:20pm]
Wind in the trees
Blowing with fierce intent
Sun shining upon the land
Scorching and burning
Evil walking upon the land
Ruling over the hapless and weak
The strong are few
The weak are many
Evil feeding upon the weak
As we would a steak
What ever are we to do
Where will we live
In this land ruled by the hateful
We will one day persevere
And rule the land once again
Good shall conquer all
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Drifting [26 Jun 2003|11:16pm]
In the sea of pleasure
I drift aimlessly

Awaiting the pleasure only
Your touch can bring

Drifting and dreaming
Of your hands caressing my skin

A soft sigh escapes my lips
Your touch is heaven sent

Loving you makes me whole

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