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Vivica (saving_myself) wrote in xgravexwisdomx,
@ 2004-03-02 13:15:00
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    My first poem in here.
    ~Wounded~
    i love you
    bringing the blade across
    muscles tightning
    eyes tearing up
    the blade hits
    i love you
    it drags across
    pulling the skin
    catching
    ripping
    stinging
    the blood comes rushing out
    i love you
    feeling elated
    i feel like im with you
    it doesnt hurt anymore
    it doesnt matter
    nothing matters
    except you
    i love you
    dressing the wound
    antiseptic, gauze, tape
    knowing i can never
    show you how much
    i fucking love you


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forevrinmyheart
2004-03-02 19:40 (link)
Hey there.

I enjoyed reading your poem, I liked the feeling in it.

>^-.-^

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(Anonymous)
2004-04-16 16:12 (link)
that is a really good poem!

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