Laurel (poodlepoodle) wrote in writingprojects, @ 2004-07-01 13:33:00

shuffle off fair weathered friend
so most of us are old and lonely
your cane creaks with each splintered step
and careening bodies to pavement
or screeching tires
or flashing red
cannot undo
the memory of soft brown leather shoes

	scarletcreation 2004-07-05 20:36 (link)
	This seems unfinished. It feels like there is more of a story behind it. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: poodlepoodle 2004-07-05 21:39 (link)
	thanks for the feedback unfinished in a sort of...unfulfilling way, or does it stand alone well? (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	scarletcreation 2004-07-05 21:41 (link)
	it stands alone well. :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)