Hopelessly Romantic (materialgirl06) wrote in writing, @ 2005-04-09 18:00:00

Current mood:	apathetic
Current music:	blink 182 "always"

Newbie
Hey everyone. Just joined today. I love to write, whether it be poetry, short stories or novels.
I'm just a vintage fanatic with too much time on her hands and her head in the clouds.
So enough about my wishful thinking, here's a contribution.



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the fall out

Slaughtered
By your hurricane
A sacrifice
On your altar
Spellbound by a beautiful disaster
That defied all logic
Shredded my sanity
Like sandpaper to chapped lips.


I’m bleeding
From my crucifix


And did you know your weapon was unexpected?
It’s unfair.
Because you can’t leave a girl so dizzy and spinning and grasping for a hold on the earth and expect her to catch her balance again.

But I must confess.

Vanity looks so good on you
Like yellow does on blue
One flash of that smile
Threatens your victims to shiver…
Make way
Clear the streets

Collapse on
Bloodstained knees
Praise hypocrisy
Like your own personal Jesus
Light the world ablaze with your treason
And all hail the great pretender.



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comments? please be honest, but not brutally. ;)

	dianna_b 2005-04-26 16:39 (link)
	I loved the two lines: "... But I must confess, vanity looks so good on you." (Reply to this) (Thread)