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nuno (swan) wrote,
@ 2003-06-04 06:17:00
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    If I was a star
    I’d be high and not that shy
    I could be there just for you
    I could sing this lines hugging my guitar
    And maybe you

    My tears would stop to cry
    My heart already blew
    But I could draw stars on my guitar
    And maybe I could talk to you

    If I was a star
    I could smile
    And I would need no friends
    My songs
    My voice and strings
    And beautiful things
    There would only be me and you
    And no one messing with me again


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ec0ssaise
2003-06-05 17:52 (link)
If I was a star,
I'd radiate,
and no further would I dance,
in eternal bliss.

If I were a star,
I'd levitate,
shining upon the mass night sky,
I'll deviate.

The constellations can invite,
onlookers of all sorts to gaze at this light,
and dance,
and we'll dance,
dance all night,
to the dreams of thousands,
wishing below us to our enchanting sight.


okay that sucked.
i just like replying poems with poems

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swan
2003-06-06 04:01 (link)
your poem is better :)


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