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Jake-currentfave-BlackWidow (streetballmob) wrote,
@ 2004-10-26 12:30:00
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    very old email exchange to/from liss
    >
    >Lets just write, because when you respond spontaneously to an enter click,
    >you
    >have no space in between to grow
    >
    >jake
    >
    >1/26/96
    >
    >
    >WILL
    >
    >
    >Lay himself in filth but clean
    >Guided by a light unseen
    >Illustrating time of hope
    >A throbbing tick, a breath of steam
    >
    >His timeless heavy print of will
    >He lives in this lost medium
    >His path is thick and desolate
    >But dreams reward his destined fate
    >
    >No movement yet, sense light ahead
    >A patient dog he will be fed-
    >This bell he waits so long to ring
    >ALL hope lies in a destiny
    >
    >Listen now and you will hear
    >This piercing sound , this pant he bares-
    >He’s given chance to cross this bridge
    >A pass to share his breath of air
    >
    >Dreams have been reality
    >And now reality his dream
    >Scorned and mocked he ran from pain
    >Effective practice, I’m insane
    >
    >They test his fitness to survive
    >These challenges keep him alive-
    >He proves himself, his weapon will
    >Entitle him invincible
    >
    >
    >-----------------------------------------------------------------
    >6/23/97
    >
    >SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST
    >
    >
    >I STEAL THE AIR
    >THAT BREATHS SALVATION
    >SURVIVAL HOLDS NO INVITATION
    >I REACH INTO ITS OPEN LUNG
    >I CLOSE MY EYES WE BREATHE AS ONE
    >
    >A PRIMAL INSTINCT, MORALS GONE
    >AN INSTANT TRADE OFF… YOU ARE DONE
    >SHOULD I RETREAT THEN I WILL DIE
    >I REACH INTO YOUR AIR SUPPLY
    >
    >I STEAL WHAT’S LEFT
    >MY EYES STILL SHUT
    >THERE’S NO REMORSE
    >IN PRIMAL THEFT
    >
    >IN BATTLES FOUGHT FOR LIFE OR DEATH
    >HE KILLS ON INSTINCT, ONE LAST BREATH
    >THE BEAST IN HIM WILL TAKE HIS PLACE
    >FAREWELL TO LAWS IN PRIMAL STATE
    >
    >BE WARNED IF I UNLEASH MY WRATH
    >THEN HISTORY WILL TAKE ITS PATH
    >YOU’LL SUFFER BY MY CURSE OF FATE
    >AND ENDLESSLY RECUPERTATE
    >
    >ALL TRACES OF YOU WILL BE GONE
    >CONVENIENCE IS NATURE’S SON
    >JUST LIVE AND LOVE CREATE A TIE
    >ENJOY BEFORE YOUR FINAL CRY!

    ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    ok now i dont know what to say you are so fucking deep. i am sure many people have fallen in. i was really feelin the second poem. you are dangerous & very beautiful. how ironic i find the perfect man and he has to leave to the other side of the country the next day. And now i only get to talk to him on the computer & i dont know what the hell you mean no space to grow, my respect for you grows every letter you send. my interest grows every day to want to know every detail about you. i have read your poems 3 times, they inspire me cuz i know the place. you make me feel that there is so much in life & so much too it. you renew my strength to keep it real.....Melissa


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