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soz (soz) wrote,
@ 2003-03-01 12:17:00
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    Current mood: ecstatic
    Current music:Ghazal by Jagjit Singh

    Main Shayar To Nahin!!
    (All shers are in urdu-hindi mix )
    Arz kiya hai-
    Unki jafa ka apni wafa say,jawab hum diye jayenge.
    Unke har iljzam ko hans kar hum sahe jayenge.
    kya hua agar unki bewafai main kami na hui.
    hum marte-marte bhi unki ,saari balaye liye jayenge.(i.e. while dying i'll take all her troubles with me)

    Arz kiya hai-
    humko bhi batao ??
    Yeh aankh kyon hai bhigi?
    Yeh rang kyon uda hai??
    tumhari wafa ko kiski jafa ne thaga hai(i.e. who has robbed u of ur trust)
    kisne dil ko toda ? kya usne moonh hai moda ?
    kehta hai yeh 'soz' sun le re o musafir
    jisne din yeh bigade ,woh phir din phirayega .
    kal ko tha jo bhatak gaya woh aaj ghar lot aayega.

    Arz kiya hai-
    Aaj phir raat ki tanhayee hai ,
    aaj phir teri yaad aayi hai.
    aag se sabak liya hai tune shaayad isliye,
    apne parwane ko jaalane aayi hai.
    hum to ishk ke dariya main kood hi gaye the,
    teri in jheel se nayenon main doob hi gaye the.
    acha hua jo yeh sard jhonka jaga gaya,
    humain humare khayalaton se utha gaya.
    par yeh bhi sach hai ki in jheel si aankhon main mai kayi baar kho chuka hoon.
    par har baar koi lehar mujhe kinare par le aati hai ,
    aur mujhe meri tanhai ka ehsaas dila jati hai.

    Arz kiya hai-
    khamkha ki udasi ab sahi nahin jaati,
    tumhar bina ab yeh zindagi ji nahin jaati,
    shikwa karoon to main karoon kisse ,
    'soz' yeh jirhe(argue) ab aur ki nahin jaati.

    Arz kiya hai-
    Fakat ek jhalak paane ko unke ,
    humne so sitam zamane ke hain sahe.
    Fakat ek mulaqat ke liye unse,
    humne so janam is zamane main hain liye.

    Arz kiya hai-
    Kalam dawat ka kya hai , aaj hai kal nahin.
    'soz' tera bhi kya hai ,aaj hai kal nahin.
    Chal jiye tu mar kar bhi kuch aisa kar ja,
    kisi hoor ko apni mohabbat ka tohfa de ja.

    Hope u have liked reading my time paas shaayari...coz they were actually written while i had nothing to do and i was on my way back to the hostel after spending a great one month holiday at my home during winters.I was in a train and was feeling bored with everyone else having slept..so i started to write these stanzas or whatever they are
    .....just thought of putting them on my journal.....and here they are . ..cheese rest next..:)

    Khudahafiz



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ferzana
2003-03-01 07:22 (link)
Wah wah!!! Shayar saab, kya baat hai, they were great, i loved reading them, u r a poet in the making :0)
Would love u to put up some more of ur poems.
Keep up the good work. Do us till write shari's still??? I wish i could write like tht, but alas, i cant :(
Have a great wkend.
Take care.

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ThanX
soz
2003-03-02 02:07 (link)
Well what to say it was just a timepass shayari but im really happy that u liked it...Coz i have lots of friends here who have actually laughed at them..but i know the shers that i have written have feelings and will always be acknowledged by one who can feel them.......Thanx for ur compliments......and i'll surely put some more when i have written some fresh ones......C U and keep visiting..

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pleiades
2003-03-01 10:21 (link)
Wah! Wah! *claps* Kya sher the!! From one Lucknowi to another Lucknowi--Aap ki shayari ka jawab nahi hai huzoor. :D I have saved all of them on my computer. They are really classics. :D

Do keep writing. :) I'd love to read more such great pieces by you.

Have a lovely day,

Love,
Sarika.

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My God !!
soz
2003-03-02 02:22 (link)
I can't believe this u have saved my shers...oh my god....this is just...:) u made my day...are yaar all my friend used to laugh at my shers.....and u say that they are classics..now i have to write some for u......i am on top of this world...im on cloud no.10....hehe..:) this is amazing i have never thought of such a compliment.....u ar just .......C U

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