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Random_Tangent (random_tangent) wrote,
@ 2003-10-07 00:04:00
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    Current mood: busy

    Once again, in lieu of content.

    
                     
    
                   FADE IN:
    
                   EXT. INTERSTATE 5, OLYMPIA, WASHINGTON -- NIGHT
    
                   A light rain is falling on Olympia. What moonlight that is 
                   able to penetrate the thick layers of clouds overhead reflects 
                   eerily off the puddles of rainwater and the fog. 
    
                   The light illuminates the silhouette of a large man as he 
                   trudges steadily north along the interstate's shoulder. His 
                   features are obscured by the darkness, but he appears to 
                   have a large bulky sack thrown over one shoulder.
    
                   The man approaches a sign. He adjusts the weight of the large 
                   cloth bag and, rubbing his chin, attempts to discern what 
                   the sign says. Lightning flashes and illuminates both the 
                   sign that reads, "Exit 105 - Port of Olympia" and THOR's 
                   face.
    
                   Thor, the god of thunder, nods to himself and continues down 
                   the exit ramp.
    
                    
    
                   EXT. GONDOLIER RESTAURANT -- NIGHT
    
                   A sleek black limousine pulls around the front of the elegante 
                   facade of the expensive Italian eatery and stops in front of 
                   the entrance to the restaurant. The limo's back door opens 
                   and a STEWARD quickly steps out opening an umbrella for one 
                   of the passengers.
    
                                         STEWARD
                             Right this way, sir.
    
                   TYR, the Norse god of law and justice, climbs out of the 
                   limo, carrying a attaché case in his left hand. His right 
                   hand is missing, bitten off long ago. He is clean shaven and 
                   his blonde hair is cut short and stylish. His eyes are hidden 
                   behind a pricey set of designer sunglasses. He is wearing a 
                   crisp dark suit. It, too, looks very expensive. 
    
                   Tyr's movements are calculated and precise. He is very careful 
                   not to acknowledge the steward's presence. Tyr strides into 
                   the restaurant and the steward clumsily tries to keep the 
                   umbrella over him.
    
                   ODIN climbs out of the limo next. He is an old, almost 
                   grandfatherly, man wearing a black suit and a red tie. His 
                   full grey beard matches the color of his hair, which is close 
                   cut and well receded. Odin's most prominent accesory is a 
                   black silk eyepatch.
    
                   The steward comes running back to help the old man out of 
                   the vehicle. He takes Odin by the arm and is promptly thrown 
                   to the ground. The steward looks up at Odin, more frightened 
                   than hurt.
    
    
                                         ODIN
                             I do not need your assistance, whelp!
    
                   The Steward whimpers. Odin glares at the sprawled young man 
                   then slams the limo door and stalks into the restaurant.
    
                    
    
                   EXT. MOM'S DINER -- NIGHT
    
                   Thor looks through the thickening storm at Mom's Diner and 
                   Truck Stop at the top of a high hill. The inside of the diner 
                   is well lit and there seems to be a lot of commotion going 
                   on inside.
    
                   Thor secures the bag and starts up the hill. 
    
                    
    
                   INT. MOM'S DINER -- NIGHT
    
                   The gods of old are having a good time eating, drinking, and 
                   telling tales of the good old days. The diner is made up of 
                   the standard linolium and vinyl color combinations that only 
                   greasy truck stops and the criminally insane can acheive.
    
                   A sign hangs by the door. It reads, "MOM'S DINER/EST. 
                   1952/Valerie Carrington, PROPRIETOR."
    
                   VAL, one of the last of the Valkyries, is a plump redhead in 
                   her fifties. She leans on the counter, a cigarette hanging 
                   out of the corner of her mouth. She is chatting with ANUBIS.
    
                   ANUBIS, Egyptian judge of the dead, is a tall slender black 
                   man. He is by far the sharpest dressed of the bunch. He's 
                   wearing a black suit with coattails that seem almost 
                   outrageous in this day and age. His head is neatly shaved 
                   and an cheap pair of drugstore sunglasses hide his eyes.
    
                                         ANUBIS
                              Any word from the big guy, Val?
    
                                         VAL
                             Not a peep since he called for the 
                             meeting. To tell you the truth, I'm 
                             getting a little worried.
    
                                         ANUBIS
                             You don't think they...
    
                                         VAL
                             I wouldn't put it past the sons-of-
                             bitches. They've already shown how 
                             well they can be trusted.
    
                   Anubis grunts in agreement as Val takes a drag. She grinds 
                   the half-finished cigarette out in an ashtray.
    
    
                                         VAL (CONT'D)
                             Sure, he's not always been the most 
                             punctual guy, but he would never 
                             call for a gathering without an 
                             emergency-- 
    
                   Val is interupted by the door being kicked open hard enough 
                   to almost knock it off its hinges. The room is startled into 
                   silence. The bell above the door DINGS and CLATTERS to the 
                   floor.
    
                   Thor limps in, cradling the sack in his arms. He is soaked 
                   in blood. Anubis pulls off his shades to get a better look 
                   at him, revealing that he has yellow eyes.
    
                                         ANUBIS
                             Holy Shit...
    
                   A murmuring rises amongst the assembled gods. Val quickly 
                   moves over to Thor.
    
                                         VAL
                             Thor, are you okay?
    
                   Thor throws his bundle to the ground. It lands with a THUD. 
                   The ropes holding the tarp around its contents have snapped 
                   and a high-powered rifle goes spinning across the floor. The 
                   bloody body of APOLLO lies motionless on the floor.
    
                   Thor presses one arm against his belly and the others realize 
                   that not all of the blood on Thor is Apollo's. Thor sounds 
                   as if he's been shot in the lung.
    
                                         THOR
                             We have been betrayed. Apollo made 
                             his choice and he has suffered the 
                             consequences.
    
                   Thor is wracked by a spasm of coughing. He spits blood at 
                   the corpse and collapses.
    
                    
    
                   INT. GONDOLIER RESTAURANT, PRIVATE TABLE -- NIGHT
    
                   Odin and Tyr make their way to a private room at the Gondolier 
                   where ZEUS waits for them. The room is lit primarly with 
                   track lights and candles, obviously meant more for romance 
                   than shady business dealings. Zeus motions for the two to 
                   sit down.
    
                                         ZEUS
                             We have a problem, gentlemen. Our 
                             gambit did not pay off.
    
                                         TYR
                             Thor? He survived?
    
    
                                         ZEUS
                             Not only does he still live, but he 
                             now is certain of the Child's 
                             existence.
    
                                         TYR
                             Perhaps we were wrong in placing our 
                             trust in the traitor Apollo.
    
                                         ZEUS
                                  (coldly)
                             You underestimated Thor's power.
    
                                         ODIN
                             Did you really think that a simple 
                             firearm could really kill my son? 
                             Honestly, Zeus, you're going senile 
                             in your old age.
    
                                         ZEUS
                             Apollo is the greatest marksman ever 
                             to walk the Earth.
    
                                         ODIN
                             Was.
    
                                         ZEUS
                             Excuse me?
    
                                         ODIN
                             Apollo was the greatest marksman 
                             ever to walk the Earth. Thor is not 
                             the kind of boy to let someone who 
                             tried to kill him go with a warning. 
                             I have no doubt that your sniper is 
                             no more. As for Thor learning of the 
                             Child, that is your own fault as 
                             well. You place far too much trust 
                             in familiar people. You must remember, 
                             Zeus, the old pantheons are broken. 
                             We are all fighting for survival in 
                             these times. Our worshipers are few 
                             and very far between. There are no 
                             great temples to be praised in. There 
                             are no sacrificial virgins to be 
                             had. There are none to die for our 
                             cause but us.
    
                   Zeus sighs.
    
                                         ZEUS
                             You are right, my old friend.
    
                                         ODIN
                             Fortunately, not all of us have to 
                             die for our cause. Sacrifices must 
                             be made, however.
                                         (MORE)
    
                                         ODIN (CONT'D)
                             I am afraid that you've fallen too 
                             far from Olympus to be of use to us 
                             any longer. My son may be an idiot, 
                             but I do not appreciate it when people 
                             try to kill him.
    
                   Zeus's eyes grow wide and he gulps very loudly.
    
                                         ZEUS
                             Now, look, Odin...I had to do it. He 
                             was putting us all in...
    
                   Odin nods to Tyr. Zeus eyes grow wider still as Tyr flips 
                   open the attaché case and pulls out a very large silenced 
                   pistol. Engraved along the side of the pistol is the word 
                   JUSTICE.
    
                   Zeus scrambles out of the chair and tries to run. Tyr calmy 
                   pistol whips Zeus and he falls to his knees. The candles 
                   cast a flickering silhouette of the two across the wall behind 
                   them.
    
                                         ZEUS (CONT'D)
                             Please! No.. No! Don't do it!
    
                   Tyr places the barrel against Zeus's forehead and pulls the 
                   trigger. The gun THWIPS with the distinctive sound of a 
                   silenced gunshot. Blood splatters across the wall and Zeus 
                   collapses like a sack of potatos. Odin smiles.
    
                                         ODIN
                             Good bye, Old friend.
    
                   Tyr puts the gun back in his case as Odin rises. The pair 
                   quickly and calmly leave the room, closing the door behind 
                   them.
    
                    
    
                   INT. APARTMENT ABOVE MOM'S DINER -- NIGHT
    
                   Thor returns to conciouness in Val's dimly lit apartment 
                   situated above the diner proper. His jacket and shirt have 
                   been cut off and lie in a bloody heap in the corner.
    
                   Thor has been patched up. A length of bandage has been wrapped 
                   around his chest. He sits up groggily and peers around the 
                   room.
    
                   His eyes stop on the beautiful DANA, a tall slender woman 
                   with fiery red hair and emerald green eyes. She's wearing a 
                   fuzzy green sweater and brown corduroy pants. A first aid 
                   kit sits in her lap.
    
                                         DANA
                             So finally the thunder god stirs.
                                         (MORE)
    
    
                                         DANA (CONT'D)
                             I was beginning to think we'd seen 
                             the last of the Odinson.
    
                   Thor grunts a short laughter. Then, immediately regreting 
                   it, he winces.
    
                                         THOR
                             It'll be a long time before this 
                             world will be rid of me. Is everyone 
                             still...
    
                                         DANA
                             Downstairs? Yes, and eagerly awaiting 
                             news from you, I'd wager. You sure 
                             do know how to make an entrance.
    
                    Thor half-smiles and stands up, trying to ignore the waves 
                   of pain. Dana also rises, hands on her hips.
    
                                         DANA (CONT'D)
                             And just where do you think you're 
                             going?
    
                                         THOR
                             Like you said, my public awaits.
    
                   Dana moves over to Thor and waggles a finger at him like an 
                   angry mother.
    
                                         DANA
                             And they can just go on waiting. 
                             You've got to get some rest.
    
                   Thor puts his hands on her shoulders and kisses her on the 
                   cheek.
    
                                         THOR
                             Don't worry about me. We thunder 
                             gods heal quickly.
    
                   Thor opens the door and walks down the narrow staircase.
    
                   INT. MOM'S DINER -- NIGHT
    
                   The various gods and goddesses in Mom's Diner are heavily 
                   engaged in coversation, merrymaking, various drinking contests 
                   and scarfing down some greasy home-cooked meals courtesy of 
                   Val. 
    
                   Everything goes quiet as Thor enters the room. Thor walks 
                   between the tables, silently nodding to the assembled deities. 
                   Upon reaching the center of the room, Thor looks around and 
                   clears his throat.
    
    
                                         THOR
                                  (addressing the gods)
                             We are not what we once were. Long 
                             ago people worshiped us. They feared 
                             us. They looked to us for guidance. 
                             Now we're lucky if the masses even 
                             acknowledge that we ever existed. 
                             We've been consigned to a few passages 
                             in a history book. We, who once held 
                             the power to shape the fates of this 
                             world, now struggle to maintain even 
                             the most mundane of existences.
    
                   This  provokes a murmur from the crowd.
    
                                         THOR (CONT'D)
                             We were immortal, once. And, we still 
                             are in some respects. Until we are 
                             utterly forgotten, we will never be 
                             gone, but if Zeus is correct, there 
                             is only so much belief to go around, 
                             which is why he and his minions want 
                             so much to get rid of us all. While 
                             we hold as true to the Old Ways as 
                             we can, Zeus has forsaken all that 
                             he stood for in his day. He is nothing 
                             than a scared old fool vying for any 
                             sort of power he can get ahold of. 
                             He holds dominion of Phone companies, 
                             Internet Providers, and Tech Stocks.
    
                   These last few words come out of Thor like someone trying to 
                   read in a foreign language. The internet makes as much sense 
                   to Thor as a pocket calculator makes to a fish.
    
                                         THOR (CONT'D)
                             He grows powerful from these things, 
                             indeed, but he also grows arrogant. 
                             He sends a traitor to put an end to 
                             me and our cause.
    
                   Thor indicates the bundle, which has been rolled back up and 
                   placed off to one side.
    
                                         THOR (CONT'D)
                             However, he put too much trust in 
                             this loose-tongued turncoat.
    
                   The assembled gods whisper to each other. Thor ignores them.
    
                                         THOR (CONT'D)
                              Even with all the strength of his 
                             technology, Zeus's power wanes. He 
                             needed a way to restore him to his 
                             former glory, but he needed to do it 
                             without massive temples and human 
                             sacrifices. He found it.
    
    
                   The gods' whispering grows even louder. Thor raises his hands 
                   to quiet them.
    
                                         THOR (CONT'D)
                             There is a child with a special power 
                             of belief. This Child has all the 
                             powers of a god, but no ability to 
                             control himself. Zeus charged Apollo 
                             with the task of abducting the child. 
                             I got in the way.
    
                   A young CHAOS GOD, garbed in a tattered Sex Pistols T-shirt 
                   and plaid pants, stands up and yells across the room at Thor.
    
                                         CHAOS GOD
                             How the 'ell do you know this ain't 
                             some kind of set-up?
    
                                         THOR
                             My source is very reliable.
    
                                         CHAOS GOD
                             What, you mean him?
    
                   The Chaos god points to Apollo's corpse.
    
                                         CHAOS GOD (CONT'D)
                             You're basing all this on the rambling 
                             of a dying man?
    
                   Thor shakes his head and pulls open the door way. He calls 
                   out a CAW into the wind and rain. HUGINN, the Raven of Thought 
                   who once belonged to Odin, flies in and lands on Thor's broad 
                   shoulder.
    
                   A few gods gasp in recognition. Anubis moves towards Thor.
    
                                         ANUBIS
                             Hey, man, do you think that's wise? 
                             Bringing him here and all?
    
                                         THOR
                             Don't worry, friend, Huginn is loyal 
                             to only me, now.
                                  (Adressing the gods 
                                  once again.)
                             Now, we must find the Child and 
                             protect him from the enemy! Focus 
                             your minds and seek out his power. 
                             Can you feel it? All the Power that 
                             ever was and ever will be flows 
                             through him. The Child is like a 
                             lighthouse on a midnight coast! If 
                             we can claim him, then we can retake 
                             the world!
    
                   The gods cheer uproariously!
    
    
                   EXT. SUBURBS OF OLYMPIA -- NIGHT
    
                   The CHEERS of the gods of old echo through the night. In a 
                   nice little neighborhood of perfect families with pretty 
                   houses, a small BOY looks out his window and up at the night 
                   sky. He hears the laughing of the ancients planning his fate. 
                   He is scared. He draws the covers up to his chin.
    
                   Lightning flashes outside and thunder BOOMS loud enough to 
                   rattle the windows in the neighbor hood. Like a knife the 
                   lightning slices open the sky and the rain plummets from the 
                   sky like so much blood.
    
                   The boy pulls the covers all the way over his head, curls 
                   up, and sleeps a restless night.
    
                    
    
                    


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whats_her_face
2003-10-07 17:59 (link)
*stands up. applauds madly.

Hey there. Miss you.

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(Anonymous)
2003-10-08 16:45 (link)
noone wants to read your sophomoric, sentry level, freshmen sophistry.
Go hurt somewhere, then come back.

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firedancerlover
2003-10-10 00:16 (link)
Wow, a lot of big, insulting words at once. You must really be a smart one. Congratulations.

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random_tangent
2003-10-10 02:18 (link)
Sophmoric, I can understand.

Sentry level is not a phrase i'm familiar with.

Freshmen sophistry is misspelled, redundant, and contradictory.


Get a tighter grasp on the English language and try again later.
I also suggest switching to a different ISP, AOL is rather passe, don't you think.

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high_ho_silver
2003-10-10 16:03 (link)
props

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Kenneth
(Anonymous)
2003-10-12 05:55 (link)
What's the frequency????????????????????????????????????????????????
Phil

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Re: Kenneth
random_tangent
2003-10-12 14:28 (link)
You're making even less sense than usual.

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weatherprophet
2003-10-15 16:57 (link)
A. I didnt misspell freshmen sophistry wrong, look it up.
B. YOU misspelled sophomoric.
C. I wont bother telling you what sentry level means, if you already don't
D. Yeah, AOl might be passe.if I masturbate to high-speed internet porn or write trite play scripts and post them on an on-line journal post for highschool pricks to read.

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Biscuit Girl
(Anonymous)
2003-10-16 02:08 (link)
There is a reason for it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE is back!!!!!!!!!!!!
And..may I compliment you on being so polite to your naysayer. Very few people on the internet would be so kind.
Phil

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By the way...
firedancerlover
2003-10-20 09:08 (link)
I thought your script was quite good. :D

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Re: By the way...
modest_serving
2003-10-20 23:22 (link)
maybe i will read it one day. Hehe, you guys crack me up. someone is obviously jealous

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donkeymoo
2003-10-25 03:54 (link)
yo dude! are you gonna enter this into lousybunchof or what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D

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Re:
random_tangent
2003-10-25 11:27 (link)
oh yeah, i didn't consider that. I guess I should. Maybe give it a once over at some time.

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better late than never
finfeet
2003-11-27 12:03 (link)
beautiful. it took me a while to get to it but i still love it. make it a moive and i might have to kiss you.

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Re: better late than never
random_tangent
2003-11-27 20:18 (link)
Well, previously i wasn't all that enthusiastic about writing a feature.

Now, though...

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hmmm....
finfeet
2003-11-28 13:25 (link)
glad i could be of service. or will be of service,...or.....whatever. write a feature first then we shall see what happens.

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Re: hmmm....
random_tangent
2003-11-29 12:18 (link)
yeah, i just finished it.

But you can't read it yet.


But we can still make with the kissing.

Oh yeaaaaah.

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