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Mike (meet_me_in_bed) wrote in eroticstories,
@ 2006-05-29 10:44:00
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    The room was full of cigarette smoke, people, sweat, abandoned drink bottles and a loud thumping bass that made your heart jump. Giz was drunk off her ass, silly drunk, almost coma drunk. She was sitting on a vomit stained couch, laughing at nothing. Her tiny skirt had ridden up, and Hub could almost see Giz's panties. God he wanted to see them. Not only see them, touch them, lick them, tear them off. He knew Giz wouldn't let him, her perfect little red mouth set in a straight line everytime he asked. Those big blue eyes full of wonder and perhaps a 'yes' but that mouth said no. Her hair was in braids tonight. Two bright, thick blond braids falling over her shoulders, coming to a wispy end at her pink, pert nipples. He knew they were pink and pert because the white mesh tank top she had on betrayed them. Hub was standing in the middle of the room, a beer bottle in his hand, fresh from the bong set up in the other room. Giz was beautiful tonight, her cheeks were flushed and her legs seemed to go on forever. Suddenly she bent over double, retching. Nothing came out. Hub rushed over, put a hand on her back.
    "Come on, let's go to the bathroom." Giz smiled weakly at him and put an arm around his shoulder. She was slim, he could have carried her, but he slipped an arm around her tiny waist and guided her to the bathroom. Someone was snoozing on the floor, and Hub kicked him before setting Giz by the bathtub. The snoozer left, mumbling obscenities. Giz mumbled a thank you as she bent over the tub, dry heaving. Hub stood by the door, shutting it tightly, locking it quietly. Giz wiped her dry mouth and leant against the cool porcelain of the toilet.
    "Gosh Hub...What would I do without you?" She smiled, that red red mouth saying "yes, yes!" Hub knelt beside her.
    "I dunno, Gizzy...I dunno what'd I'd do without you." He reached a hand up to the back of her head and kissed her on her bright red lips. Her blue eyes widened and she pulled away.
    "Hub, what--?" She couldn't finish the sentance, Hub closed his mouth over her's. She tasted sweet, vodka and cognac in her mouth. She closed her eyes against him, her arms motionless beside her. Hub was excited, his kissed his way down from her mouth to her neck, his hands tugging on her braids. She slid a hand up to his skinny chest and pulled at his shirt. He let her take it off, and he pulled off her mesh tank top. She wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him. He struggled with his trousers, unbuttoning them, yanking down her her skirt.
    "Oh god, Giz." Hub exclaimed, his erection springing out. Her blue eyes widened and she turned around, stomach and breasts on the toilet seat, her little ass turned to him. Hub knelt, putting his hands on her thighs, and guided his cock into her pussy. She clenched her jaw.
    "Oh, Hub..." Hub pulled her onto him, and started fucking her in a semi-fast rhythm, her ass making a slapping noise as it hit his pelvis. She grabbed onto the toilet seat and moaned.
    "God, Hub!" She yelped, her clit being brushed with his slippery cock with every thrust, with every pull, it was pushed against the cold porcelain of the toilet. Hub couldn't believe how wet she was, and he strained into her, his cock aching. Suddenly she came, and she spasmed. He held his breath and tried not to come, it worked, and she collapsed on the toilet.
    "Hub, Hub..." She said weakly. He pulled her up, facing him, and kissed her, a finger sliding down her clit.
    "Hub! It's so sore! Stop, Hub, oh god, stop!" he fingered her mercilessly, and as her little pink pearl exploded again, he moved her quickly, shoving her against the tub. Her head hit the edge.
    "Hub...ow..." She reached back to her head and touched where she'd hit. Her hand came away red.
    "Hub, I'm...bleeding..." She said weakly. He'd lifted her hips and rammed his cock into her. She moaned as he fucked her pussy.
    "Hub, stop, I'm..." She faltered and her head fell limply against the tub as Hub leaned over her, breathing hard, his pelvis thrusting his cock into her sore pussy. She went limp everywhere, and Hub noticed it when she stopped clenching around his cock.
    "Giz?" He said, brushing sweaty hair from his eyes.
    "Giz, sweetie?" He let her go and she slipped onto the floor, blood smearing from her head, a trail on the tub.
    "Oh god, Giz?" He grabbed her and set her in the tub, she looked more comfortable there. There was a faint blueish tint on her red red lips. Her mouth was open, slightly, in an 'oh' shape. Hub stepped over her, he knelt, straddling her.
    "Giz? Giz, oh god oh god, Giz? Gizzy?" Her chest wasn't rising as it should. He leant over her, his hear to her little red mouth. As he did so, his still-hard cock brushed against her pussy, which was glistening with her come. He sucked in a breath and looked at his aching erection before looking at her perfect face. He grabbed her hips and pushed his cock into her. He fucked the unresponsive girl harder than he'd fucked anyone before, her head bouncing against the side of the tub. He pulled out just as he was going to come, and he crawled up her body. He took his aching, swollen cock in his hand and jerked himself off, putting a hand behind the cold girl's head, he came hard, and spurted white gooey cum over Giz's face. He opened her jaws slightly and stuck his flaccid cock in her mouth, her wet mouth turning his limp penis into a hard, swollen monster again. He gently fucked her mouth before moving back down to her swollen pussy, sliding his cock into her tight hole. He could do this all night, meanwhile Giz's brain was shutting down from lack of oxygen.


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(Anonymous)
2006-06-04 22:24 (link)
it was a good story at the begining then it seemed to turn me off when she started to bleed and go unconsious.. i dontknow.. too scary.

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numbedemotions
2006-06-05 22:34 (link)
That's boreder line ayphxiation fetish/necrophilia.

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I can't say I was at all turned on. Id vote more disgusted. I didnt find it a all erotic that the character didnt care enough for his partner to at least make sure she was okay. It also borded on rape-scene. Again I didnt like it because Ive known too many rape victims.
But for those who liked it... more power to you.
This one just isnt for me.
~Jay

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2006-08-03 01:41 (link)
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If this stories not for you..this forum isn't for you.

GET OUT.

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(Anonymous)
2006-06-07 08:37 (link)
i think that this is well written, if not to my taste so well done

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iamsporadic666
2006-06-26 00:27 (link)
I thought it was funny because it was border-line rape.

to the kid who didnt like it because he's known to many rape victims:

shut up. stop sympathyzing for your weak friends. it's their faults they got raped.

good story.

keep on fucking the unconcious.

-cory.

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snowwhiteluv
2006-06-29 23:17 (link)
Artistically I think it was really good. It would make such a good plot for a movie.

And it's not someone's fault that they got raped!!!! WTF dude?

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