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Emma (newtbsbrand) wrote in emolyrics,
@ 2004-03-13 21:21:00
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    Current mood: pessimistic
    Current music:Spill Canvas- 3685

    Just wrote this...

    "Divine Heartache"

    I never thought I could fall this hard
    I sit here and I think of you
    I think of your face, of the thoughts you have
    I close my eyes and wish
    I wish that I'll see you standing there
    But when I open my eyes
    The only thing I see is nothing
    The only thing I feel is alone

    I used to miss this feeling,
    this feeling of longing for someone
    So much it hurts to breathe
    Now it's returned and all because of you
    I forgot how intense it was..

    And now you're breaking my heart
    and I want to rid myself of it all over again
    But knowing that you exist stops me

    I wish that you wanted me
    And longed for me the way I do for you
    But for now I'll sit wishing and wondering,
    wondering if you'll love me and when
    So I'll close my eyes once more
    And wait to see your face embrasing my heartache..

    tell me what you think..



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(Anonymous)
2004-03-14 00:46 (link)
i think its really good..and it doesnt sounds to old i really like the line about how like knowing you exists stops me cuz thats the feeling i have..good writting..

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newtbsbrand
2004-03-14 02:00 (link)
thankssss.

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