Kim (xmissyoux) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-03-13 19:39:00

Current mood:

creative

just a little something i wrote... think its good? bad? gross? let me know. <3

it came just as imperfection would start
you held my body close
but even closer , my heart
you saw it beating gently and lonely as its been
you picked it up and cared for it
like nothing it has seen
then right before the stars came out
just before the beauty became
a living nightmare in this dream
that started to make me insane
you took the heart you tricked into love
and threw it at a wall
the tears were raining heavily
on the night I lost it all
and as we danced my knees gave out
I wish that you weren't there
I wished I never loved you
and I wish I never cared
I tried to take the time with you
to get to know you more
to try to bring us peace
but it only brought us war
this morning I took all the sweet words
and put them in a box
so you could put them back in your collection
and keep them sealed with locks
of all the clouds and rain drops
that i've saved along the years
nothing could prepare me for this sudden break of fears
a shattered heart cannot be glued
by the victim of the mess
it takes the one who broke it
to put it back inside my chest
and i know you'll keep close the key
just so you can frighten me
and i'll be scared until I fall again

	bloody__kisses 2004-03-13 21:05 (link)
	thats honostly one of the best user written posts ive ever seen (Reply to this) (Thread)

	xmissyoux 2004-03-14 07:07 (link)
	aw thank you....! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	lilsoccerchick9 2004-03-13 21:23 (link)
	Amazing. I write some stuff, but I've stopped lately because it's no good. I wish I could write like that. Keep it up. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: xmissyoux 2004-03-14 07:06 (link)
	aww thanks! yeah, i just went through about 6 months where I couldnt write anything but i managed to write that last night. keep tryin'! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)