Miss B (creekgeek) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-03-12 19:23:00

i wrote this..there is more but this is the best part..
Depression consumes my soul
Emptiness hollows out my insides
I am the epitome of nothingness

idk..i don't think i'm that great of a writer but w/e just thought i'd share..oh heres more..of course i only post my "good" ones lol

Last night I looked to the stars for answers
The answers I’ve always been afraid of
Afraid of superstitions
They told me a story
A story of us
They lined pictures of you
And dreams of me
The universe covers more than just you and me
The universe is us
We have it all
We don’t need anything
I just need you and you need me

Tonight when I looked to the stars for answers
The answers I already knew
The answers I needed to know
But there was nothing there
It was a immense canvas of beggaring nothing
Pictures of regrets
Nightmares of lies
The universe turned into a thousand black holes
The universe had moved on
It belonged to someone else
They have it all
I just need you… and only you

i really like this one b/c of the 12 stanzas deal..*anyways*

	(Anonymous) 2004-03-12 19:53 (link)
	its an okay poem. u definately should develop more ... good effort though. (Reply to this) (Thread)