X-tina (hurtstobreathe) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-03-11 22:49:00

Current mood:

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I feel like crying
And the reason is a mystery
I feel hollow inside
Like an abandoned cave
Can someone fill it?
Make me whole again
I feel sick
And want to make this feeling go away

wrote it in math class lol......comments pleaseeeeeeeee

	the makings for a nice piece justsignbythex 2004-03-11 23:09 (link)
	ur feelings are slightly naive.. but theyre true and genuine.. if its a cave... fill it in. Details... an unused metaphor makes me mad. You have a nice quality.. i can tell you that. but i think for it to be "good" by more than one standard u need more. Tweak it and get back 2 me. (Reply to this) (Thread)

i know what its like.. (Anonymous) 2004-03-12 07:54 (link)

..hey..after reading your thing..i know what its like i feel the same way and i also would like it if this feelings could disappear into thing air but i know it cant. Be happy that you dont know why you feel this way..i know why and it just makes things worse because i know i cant change it or fix it so ill be in this position for a while..but you'll be ok..soon you will find something to put there.. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: i know what its like.. (Anonymous) 2004-03-12 13:52 (link)
	your writing sucks. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)