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an anonymous punch spiker (justsignbythex) wrote in emolyrics,
@ 2004-03-11 17:48:00
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    Current mood:crappy
    Current music:Ender, Finch

    Yes, another.
    .::Just Sixteen::.
    Wrote this last week.

    He never got a promise.
    She’ll never feel this pain.
    He watches her as she walks home.
    The lights go down on Main.

    He takes up all the sidewalk.
    His heart is heavy here.
    He can’t help but wonder,
    If he should disappear.

    Lights go off and now she’s gone
    Time is cheap
    And life’s too long
    The night is young, just sixteen, lost in all the quiet things.
    That might just drive him down to madness
    All this sadness.

    Nothing feels much better
    Day by day by week
    He’s not alive for waiting
    She’s not alive to speak

    And as he sits awake in bed
    The sun hangs low inside his head
    He lays to sleep but falls apart
    She don’t know she broke his heart

    Lights go off and now she’s gone
    Time is cheap
    And life’s too long
    The night is young, just sixteen, lost in all the quiet things.
    That might just drive him down to madness
    All this sadness.

    He’s stuck in a hole
    Covered in hurt
    Crying crimson upon his shirt
    He’s had enough
    She hasn’t called
    He says “it’s good, I’ll be gone.”

    And as he raises his eyes
    The mirror jumps as he blinks and cries
    Tears are going cold
    Tears are going cold


    Lights go off and now she’s gone
    Time is cheap
    And life’s too long
    The night is young, just sixteen, lost in all the quiet things.
    That might just drive him down to madness
    All this sadness.



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(Anonymous)
2004-03-11 18:38 (link)
that was AWESOME. even from me, the view of a girl. makes me wish i had a writing talent like you do.

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that makes me warm and fuzzy
justsignbythex
2004-03-11 21:34 (link)
aww thanx

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