take it back TAKE IT BACK (letmeunfold) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-25 12:00:00

Current mood:	crushed
Current music:	bright eyes- a perfect sonnet

spare me the weight of the truth
with every blink of your eye, another knife creeps through my gut
maybe tonight my dreams will be reflected
in a pool of your tears

[just somethin i wrote quick.. comments?]

	(Anonymous) 2004-01-25 12:10 (link)
	I LOVE IT (Reply to this) (Thread)

	facists_suck 2004-01-25 12:56 (link)
	yeah, it sucked. it isn't deep. it isn't meaningful. it isn't pretty. it's stupid. you aren't a good poet. you suck at existence. i hate you. slit your wrists and cry in a corner. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: letmeunfold 2004-01-25 13:15 (link)
	wow that was harsh but thanks for being honest...i guess ill try harder next time or something.. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)