its.love.make.it.hurt (pinky86) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-04 03:03:00

Current mood:	discontent
Current music:	the cure--friday, i'm in love

hey--im new. here's something i wrote...please comment/criticize, whatever.

the true way to see someone
can't be like this
the spherical stain
wipes away the mistake
leaving an even bigger mark
the blemish of the heart
is impossible to find
but can't you feel it?
i always could.
love is a crazy lie
suck you in, throw you out
but we return each time.
it's not enough anymore
to say that i hate you.

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	pinky86 2004-01-04 18:22 (link)
	awww thanks so much! no one has ever liked my writing so its really nice that you do! if u want to read some of my stuff/other lyrics or poems, just read my journal. i'll post on emolyrics too, though. thanks! --taryn (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)