the only loser you'll ever know (unprettyful) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-02 20:52:00

Current mood:	loved
Current music:	incubus - antigravity (summer romance)

hey everyone, i thought i would post this... my friend jeremy wrote it and i thought it was beautiful. comments, criticism, anything appreciated :)

There were those days, strung far away, where feelings weren't of yesterday, the pain was strong and getting tire, the feelings then i dont admire, i've thanked God for giving me you, and giving me these feelings so new, your prudent words send chills up my spine, the meaning so powerful, and still so devine, the things i feel are of blunder, they leave God himself in deep wonder, your soft lips will dance with mine, ill love you forever, forever in time.

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	xotapdancerox 2004-01-03 02:06 (link)
	woah, Tell him that is absolutly wonderful!! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	irishcarbomb 2004-01-03 03:27 (link)
	oh my gosh, that is adorable. it makes me want to cry in a happy way (Reply to this) (Thread)

	beautiful.. ifucouldonlysee 2004-01-03 06:09 (link)
	wow, i'd die if someone wrote that about me.. it's wonderful! was it about you?.. ;-) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: beautiful.. unprettyful 2004-01-03 16:02 (link)
	this one wasn't but he's written stuff equally as beautiful, and yeah i died heh (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	awwww saltinourwounds 2004-01-03 06:41 (link)
	Kudos to your friend....I was about to ask the same question...did he write it for you?...it really is too cute for words... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Yeah astrapuer 2004-01-03 13:33 (link)
	Im the writer, Ive written some for her, but this one doesnt happen to be about her. (Reply to this) (Thread)