steph (contemplation) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-02 14:47:00

something i just thought of...
you used to make me feel beautiful
now im just as ugly as i feel

	(Anonymous) 2004-01-02 15:38 (link)
	good, but wouldn't it make more sense if the second line was 'now i feel as ugly as i am' or something like that? (Reply to this) (Thread)

	contemplation 2004-01-02 16:35 (link)
	i was thinkin of changing the top line so it was this: you used to make me think i was beautiful now im just as ugly as my mood swings hmmmm idk lol, ill work on it (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	surfacing 2004-01-02 16:42 (link)
	you should write a whole song or poem or whatever and then see what fits the best.. that's what i would do any way. i think that's a good line and a nice way to start. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

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