Sacred Spirit (sacred_spirit) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2003-11-25 00:25:00

what i wrote today..
something i wrote that i thought i should share..11/24-25/03

Today I sit around lonely
deciding what to do without you
white snow fills the ground
another moment lost in blue
and every day that passes
is a dream I knew wouldn’t come true

remember the days?
remember the fun?
I would give the snow
for just one more day of warm sun
whatever happened to yesterday
the life that was full of pain
it never ended in sunlight
it always poured down rain
whatever happened to tomorrow
those dreams we held on so
they got lost in the waves
of the waters in our souls
they drifted off into the sunset
it was sad to watch them go

this is just another road
on our road trip to the stars
I know we’ll find them one day
its so hard now it seems
the road that we stayed on
didn’t lead us to our dreams

comments welcome! :)

	that song... (Anonymous) 2003-11-25 02:52 (link)
	that song you wrote is absolutly beautiful i thought id let you know. <3 Jenna (Reply to this) (Thread)

	Re: that song... sacred_spirit 2003-11-25 23:57 (link)
	aww thank you so much!! i really appreciate it!! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

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	sacred_spirit 2003-11-25 23:59 (link)
	this was the first time i put something i wrote online! so i really am thankful that you guys liked it!! :) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	and ps. sacred_spirit 2003-11-26 00:04 (link)
	i like my icon too! :) its willow from buffy..this halloween episode was my favorite..(2nd season) (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	punkloverock 2003-11-25 23:38 (link)
	Aww....I love it, love it, love it. Its really good. I am proud other people can write and i cant. (Reply to this) (Thread)

	thanks! sacred_spirit 2003-11-26 00:02 (link)
	hehe well this means i'm gonna have to put more stuff up..:p..thank you so much! I like writing..now i don't think I am very good at it..though i guess that would be normal I can always see stuff I say that I don't like and then they say no it was great leave it in..so many thanks again!! these comments really made my day!! (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: thanks! punkloverock 2003-11-26 00:08 (link)
	Im glad they did. We all need something to make our days...My boyfriend can write damn well too. But yet i still am terrbile. More stuff from you would be nice to read. And yes you are a good writer (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: thanks! punkloverock 2003-11-26 00:12 (link)
	i have got to be getting old to you but if you want to talk....pinkstarscry on aim. byes (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: thanks! sacred_spirit 2003-11-26 00:37 (link)
	k i added you..on aim i'm todpeep (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)