Cynema (periish_) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2003-11-24 13:29:00

November Letters
my suicide note memorized,
its 15 lines long,
for all the reasons I've categorized,
there's hate, lost of trust,
and of course, loving you is a must,
drinking brings on one line,
the rock brings on four more,
I swear I'm drowning right now..

When I hold this pencil up close,
I don't see it.
It makes me want to bleed,
I don't know it.
It's so foregn to me,
why you think that I should be,
someone so ordinary...

my suicide note memorized to you,
it's 15 troubles from what you are,
and all the pain you bring on to me,
from the letters you write,
with the words you won't speak,
I'm trying hard to turn off the blood.

When I hold this pencil up close,
I don't see it.
It makes me want to bleed,
I don't know it.
It's so foregn to me,
why you think that I should be,
someone so ordinary...


15 lines into my suicide note memorized,
1 for the black times,
3 for all my tears to blur,
and 8 on the good times,
i write 2 more for our love,
and 1 last line to make you cry,
because you know that I would rather die,
than see your despair...

i'll leave it nameless,
so you'll forget me again,
and somehow I'll be brought up around dinnertime,
three decades from now,
when you're all but there,
that's when I'll come around,
and bring you back to where....

I love you.

Please give me some feedback...that's an original that I wrote, and I just want to know how it looks to everyone...it sounds better than it actually looks, but if the lyrics are bad, I'm going to rewrite it and change a few chords.

	(Anonymous) 2003-11-24 14:22 (link)
	i think its unbelievable. beautiful.. i love it. post more songs =) xxsamanthaxx (Reply to this) (Thread)

	your song :) iheartjon 2003-11-24 16:04 (link)
	hey well i think your lyrics are great, keep up the good work :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	_sugarc0ated 2003-11-24 16:19 (link)
	wow. I think that its awsome. I hope you dont mind if I post it in my journal...with credit to you of course lol I really think its amazing (Reply to this) (Thread)

	clandestinestar 2003-11-24 17:07 (link)
	I think it is really well done! I enjoyed the whole thing! (Reply to this) (Thread)

	surfacing 2003-11-24 19:06 (link)
	the whole this is amazing, especially the "15 lines into my suicide note memorized.." stanza (Reply to this) (Thread)

	bloody__kisses 2003-11-24 19:36 (link)
	fxckng amazing (wipes tears from eyes) (Reply to this) (Thread)