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hey guys, this is a song I wrote sometime last month & I've been meaning to post it in here - it's one of my better ones and it's NOT your typical emo song.. think more along the lines of TBS- so I think you might like it..? Just gimme some feedback if you want, or read it and mumble it sucks, whatever floats your boat.
Target Practice
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An all-out battle (left me feeling right)
Call me up the next day and tell me how sorry
I look when I don't take you back
Well I'm sorry, it took so long (for me to)
Cause I don't look when I take you back
You set me up again
Roll out the red carpet
It's the debut of my greatest mistake
Yeah so what do you say to that
Sweetheart you broke it (the worst it's been)
I wrote it down three days later
And you went down with what I wrote
Ten forty-seven
I called you just
To hear you breathe and then I hung up
My coat and called it a day
Such a long hard day (left me feeling right)
Yeah it's only morning and I'm calling it quits
That call made me do it (I swear)
Yeah so what do you say to that
Sweetheart, you broke it (the worst it's been)
I wrote it down three days later
And you went down with what I wrote
So you wanna see me smile? (ask me)
Ask me if I care
You wanna see me smile? (ask me)
Ask me if I care
I don't, I don't
Roll out the red carpet
It's the debut of my greatest mistake
Yeah so what do you say to that
I'd amaze you
Just ask
thanksya
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2003-11-05 15:00
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Roll out the red carpet
It's the debut of my greatest mistake
that line is awesome!... well done.(Reply to this) (Thread) |
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