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Fractured Thought (dead_stars) wrote,
@ 2007-03-29 20:48:00
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    ...sometimes...
    If I thought the phone would ring
    and if I thought it would be you -
    I'd hesitate on purpose to prove I wasn't waiting.

    I'm living in a dream these days and
    imagining cats crawling
    looking for your hiding place.
    You were denied and returned;
    you do that a lot, but I wish
    you'd just go away!
    ...sometimes...

    If I thought you could see me inside
    and if I thought you could do any good -
    I'd hesitate by accident in revealing I'm afraid.

    I'm staying in this dream world
    imagining a smile
    calling you from hiding.
    But we both know it's a farce -
    I want nothing from you,
    other than that you'd go away!
    ...sometimes...


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(Anonymous)
2007-03-30 20:24 (link)
Very impressive!

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dead_stars
2007-03-31 09:12 (link)
thank you?

I personally think it lacks something, but obviously, I posted it anyway, so I'm glad someone thought it was impressive

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