dead-poet (dead_poet) wrote, @ 2004-03-09 16:17:00

Here's kudos' song
Seemingless

Everyday I wake up
And I let you know
That I care and I'm here
But still you let go

Why the hell should I stay
When I could just be free?
Why am I still here?
You don't even see

Coz I'll just never be enough
To make you change your mind
And I'm just so dead-tired
Of all the stuff I do for you
I never let go
You never give in
It's all an impossible dream

And now... you go...
And now... you leave...
You don't see
Why I did
All these... just for you...
All these... coz I'll....

You don't see me
You don't see me
You don't see...

	crimsonwaters 2004-03-10 07:54 (link)
	Ohh. Refer to previous comment. Haha. 'Tis very much connected. :D To the writer Kudos: Geesh... let go, dude. Let go. It's not the end of the world... or maybe it will be soon. So there's not much time to have a new life, eh? Carpe Diem! (I can't believe I'm saying this :P) Oh, nice lyrics by the way. :) (Reply to this) (Thread)

	kudos 2004-03-13 00:38 (link)
	actually, I was just in a really bad mood when I wrote this song... I guess that's why the song sounds like I'm a pathetic loser... hahaha... but yeah, Carpe Diem! I believe in that... Oh, I'm not a loser by the way... or maybe I am and I just don't know it... blech... I don't care... thanks for commending my lyrics... :P (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	crimsonwaters 2004-03-16 07:59 (link)
	Erm... welcome(?) Haha... I wasn't implying that you're a loser. :P Haha... Well, it's a good way of releasing your frustrations anyway. It's a free world. ;D (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kudos 2004-03-16 08:12 (link)
	yeah! freedom!! haha.. :P (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kudos 2004-03-13 00:32 (link)
	oh yeah, please take out the last three lines of the songs rych... it's sounds like some lines from a song of A Perfect Circle (three libras)... yeah.. that's all... thanks to the one who commented btw... (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dead_poet 2004-03-14 18:47 (link)
	shure thing. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)