dead-poet (dead_poet) wrote, @ 2004-03-03 15:03:00

Current mood:	"poetic" daw
Current music:	Echo -- Incubus

your tears on my tongue
your tears on my tongue
no taste
nothing
          but bitterness

was this what the world gave to you?
or was it what you chose
to take back with you on the journey
from that world they called earth
          from that world where only brutes lived

you regret the travel
maybe it wasn't worth it
          or maybe because you never knew it was tiring
or empty

yes, empty, the world is as definition in itself is
i started searching for answers
          but they never came
never
for i never really seeked for them

life is an irony
a big mistake
          but the bigger irony still is living
          and the bigger mistake is us

and your tears
bitter with pain and languishing and morosity
i spat out of me
hell, i didnt know even
you weren't worth the while...



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go ahead, feel free to let me know what I tried to say

crimsonwaters 2004-03-04 10:13 (link)

Whoa. Seems like The character's talking to himself. Berating, full of regrets. Are you? ;p Pretty sad, actually. Wondering what went wrong and all that shit (excuse the profanity). Wondering about life in particular. Yeah... it happens. There comes a point in one's life where he/she asks the question, "is it really worth it?" I suppose it's alright to ask and ponder... but to act on it? Ah, that's a different matter. :D Lovely. The poem's full of unasked questions, unfelt emotions, and undiscovered answers. Interesting concept. The irony of all irony. :) Great! Keep it up! p.s. If this is what I think it is... don't kill yourself yet. Haha, just kidding. ;p (Reply to this) (Thread)

	dead_poet 2004-03-09 02:56 (link)
	not me, just the persona. well, there's no background or anything. so i dont know... and profanities are allowed here... course. :P irony of all irony = malabo like hell... hehehe... there are just some things not worth knowing at all... suicide... nope. haha... :D just another i-hate-the-world-guy's concept and persona. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)