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kala ko perfect na
so today, i went to starbs as usual, and the stupid freaks weren't there! sobrang fun pare! i just hung around all day texting my girlfriend para di sya makulit. i also came up with some poetry na will kick that edgar alan poser's ass!
here it is:
i'm an alone entity
always alone
feeling the sadness
always sad
maybe one day
she'll hear me say
"you're mine"
3:24 pm
my starbucks katipunan
quezon city
philippines
grabe, that totally flowed out! i'm going to copyright all my poetry from now on! baka i-steal ni edgar alan poser. il also try to leave some of my poetry on the table when i leave, bka makita ng crush ko :)
anyway, my girlfriend is totally making me sakal na! she like wants me to make her pansin in school pare. can you believe that? bka makita kami together, and my crush might find out! how will i explain to my crush that she's only panandalian pare? labo talaga niya. it really fucking gets me dude.
during the later part of my day starbsing, guess who fucking walked in around 8:30 pm? fucking salvador daloser! he was with one of his stupid long-haired-feeling-artist-feeling-stud-asshole friends. apparently, this one also draws to attract attention! putangina! he was just sitting there smoking his mild seven lights like he was soooooo cool. man, if i weren't so at peace with the world, i'd KICK HIS ASS! im way cooler than that stupid kupal. he even has the cellphone i'm asking my girlfriend to save up for so i can borrow it! god i want a 6610 so bad!
i'll make it iwan here muna, im back to my poetry people!
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| umm.. - (Anonymous), 2003-08-31 04:05:33 |
| poetry? 
(Anonymous)
2003-11-05 14:31
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god. you are so fucked up. your so called poetry is an insult to all poets out there, including me, perhaps. total crap. i could've written better poetry when i was in grade 3. maybe what passes for good poems for you passes as shit to others. and you smear great artists and writers with your foul touch with "salvador daloser" and "edgar allan poser". maybe theyre just better than you that's why youre jealous. but still, you amuse me. (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| OPINION...OPINION... 
(Anonymous)
2003-11-08 02:59
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For people who tell others to leave him alone well this is for COMMENTS and OPINIONS so you don't have any right to hold our FREEDOM OF EXPRESSION if you know that and besides the poem sucks.... (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| kekeke 
(Anonymous)
2003-11-17 01:32
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you can work on my chooorizoooooooo beaotch! kekeke! -eXstAsSy (Reply to this) (Thread) |
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(Anonymous)
2003-11-20 12:32
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God, what a fuckin' excuse for a poem there...tsk tsk tsk kawawa ka naman
my 8 month old brother can write better than u can(Reply to this) (Thread) |
| Pity.... 
(Anonymous)
2003-12-08 01:40
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I pity you.... NOT.
Grabe, what's with your attitude. SO what are you trying to say? That you're a user? Why don't you just break it with your girlfriend. You're better off single.
And I agree with some of the other people who have commented I've seen better, I've written better than you have. Stop trying to be what you're not, stop doing things you don't want others to do to you, stop saying things that will only make you look like an idiot and an airhead. So what if those two dreadlock dudes draw while they're in starbucks, it's not against the law is it? ALL of my artist friends draw in public and you don't see them getting chased around by policemen or to catch others attention. It just so happens that people do like to look at their work especially if their work is good.(Reply to this) (Thread) |
| asshole ka
(Anonymous)
2003-12-21 04:21
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YOU'RE ONE OF THE STUPIDEST AND MOST MORONIC ASSHOLES I'VE EVER ENCOUNTERED!! YOUR POEM SUCKED AS MUCH AS YOU DO. GO SHOVE YOUR FUCKING 'STARBS COFFEE JELLY FRAP' UP YOUR ASS!!! TANGINA KA, IKAW ANG PA-COOL!! (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| Tangina
(Anonymous)
2004-01-08 10:46
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Isa ka sa mga taong tinatae ng magulang niya mula sa ilong, nakain ka ata ng tae e, mahiya ka naman, pangalan ng eskwela mo dinadawit mo pa sa sobrang katangahan mo, para kang baklang kinantot ng sanlibong elepante tsaka tsumupa ng sang milyong kabayo. Hahahahahaha Kung ayaw mo na sa girlfriend mo, simplengsimple, de hiwalayan mo. PUTANG INA MO MAMATAY KA NA!!!!!! (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| LOL
(Anonymous)
2004-08-25 08:52
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caffeine rush dude, i'm laughing my ass off in faraway... *toot!* (para enigma naman ang aking locale)
but you are so funny ha. or rather, it's funny how people react to you! naiisip ko tuloy, sino talaga ang mukang tanga? hahahahaha sorry, pero enjoy ako sa comments mo.
kahit magmura buong world... alam ko ito ang totoo: asar talo! hahahahahahaha
you're so funny it takes the cake. iilan lang kaming on your side, dude! yeah! link kita. for sure. kung gusto mo, link mo rin ako. chiz!
http://svelterogue.bluechronicles.net(Reply to this) (Thread) |
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(Anonymous)
2004-09-09 06:37
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yeah! you really got my attention there dude! and your gud at it hehehehehe. i just hope you really dont exist in person. I agree with one of the commentor here ANG ASAR TALO... mmmm why dont you do that with the politicians i ges it will make their bon-bon ek-ek get hot and hit the IT LAW harder in the butt so everybody will be benefited say "SECURITY" and more specific law on "FREEDOM OF ESPRESSO" and when they get really mad join you on your mental way of thinking... hehehehe pis out bro. (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| Kusottare!
(Anonymous)
2004-10-30 10:33
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Got to be one of the lousiest poems I've had the misfortune to read. Not to mention senseless. Great job Suckspear. (Reply to this) (Thread) |
| That totally flowed out?
(Anonymous)
2004-11-03 02:46
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Yup, that totally flowed out dude... out your fuckin' ass...
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| respect his stuff 
(Anonymous)
2004-11-14 10:47
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well i think u should let him mind his "ka-conyohan" though im not really in favor with this kind of people...
his poetry? well evry poet is entitled to put up his ideas...well respect him if he calls it "ideas"..
we're living ina democratic country guys so if caffeinerush wants to express hisself in his own conyo way let him!
jsut one thing dude...know ethics
ayt? no ofens u write gud...but ur one bad critic...if u wnt 2 be respected by others remember the golden rule of confucius...(Reply to this) (Thread) |
| hmmm
(Anonymous)
2004-11-15 02:15
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hmmm...jez work on the english, that might save ur ass from all the negative comments. and with regards ur gurl, puhlease jez brake up on her. dont stay wit her if u think she's only ur "meantime" gurl. and i hope u really dont exist on this planet...hope that all this stuff are jez made up to get attention. ciao! (Reply to this) (Thread) |
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