Annarti (annarti) wrote, @ 2003-10-07 00:13:00

The Price of Freedom ~ Original
story~ The Price of Freedom
about~ English Imaginative Writing piece. I rea~lly wanted to do something with the twins or at least the bastid or Bastet, but the thing is they all require background knowledge and/or one helluva lot more than 1000 words to tell their story. So here's some random chick who's ended up being part of the Raykin legend. Some stuff's been repeated from other writings, but that's just so the SSABSA dudes and my teacher know what I'm on about XD; Comments, crits, whatever are welcome as per usual ^^

	drazzi 2003-10-12 09:53 (link)
	Lovely~~~~ imagary sweerheart =D I just feel that from That was when it first began. onwards the story really loses... momentum or something. It doesn't seem as strong as the beginning and middle is. Hey look, I crited XD; (Reply to this) (Thread)