Adrian Elsbeth (adrian_elsbeth) wrote, @ 2003-04-17 18:37:00

Current mood:

bored

Public Entry:


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Here are more Haiku.
Writing them is so easy.
It takes mere seconds.

Classes, where are you?
I must write prose to kill time.
I long for schoolwork.

Val is unconcious.
He sleeps more deeply than me,
and I am the dead.

Girls carrying guns
Wearing lots of leather clothes
Wandering the halls.


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-Adrian

	brecheiniog 2003-04-17 20:59 (link)
	Leather it is not I think that it is all fake; No quality there The haiku is fun Poetry, but not really - Doesn't even rhyme Do the living dead Suffer from insomnia And pace in their crypts? Being dead is not Condusive to sleep sometimes But I must away I have things to do - Evil and Nefarious - My plans are so good (Reply to this) (Thread)

	adrian_elsbeth 2003-04-17 21:23 (link)
	Imitation, then? How cheap and tawdry that is. Unfashionable. Sometimes I can't sleep but that isn't a problem. No rest is needed. Evil plans are nice. One should always be prepared and looking their best. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: brecheiniog 2003-04-18 10:45 (link)
	You are very good At making poetry up I revise my thoughts Of you as a vamp. For you remind of my Best mate and love Spike Who was a poet In the nineteenth century But he was bloody shite (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	adrian_elsbeth 2003-04-18 12:06 (link)
	William the Bloody? Decent Vocabulary but awkward wording. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	Re: brecheiniog 2003-04-18 12:25 (link)
	Totally dreadful. He gave it all up, thank Christ, For the good of all (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kailyn_gadaire 2003-04-17 23:46 (link)
	You are very cute! I heard you charge for contact How much for a hug? ...well? ^_^ (Reply to this) (Thread)

	adrian_elsbeth 2003-04-18 00:47 (link)
	Six dollars per hug. Do not squeeze me too tightly. I bruise easily. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kailyn_gadaire 2003-04-18 01:00 (link)
	Here is your money. Don't spend it all in one place! Unless you should, I guess... And with those 'poetic' words, Kailyn gave the boy with vampire blood a hug. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	adrian_elsbeth 2003-04-18 11:54 (link)
	Thank you, young lady. That wasn't too horrible. Here is your receipt. Kailyn Gadaire ---------------- 1 Hug = $6.00 Total = $6.00 --------------- Shop smart! Shop A-Mart! That's six more dollars To add to my collection. Business is thriving. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	kailyn_gadaire 2003-04-18 13:12 (link)
	I'm older than you So don't call me young lady! Nyah nyah nyahnyah nyah! And you overcharge But maybe again once I Get some more money (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	evilpiratequeen 2003-04-18 23:23 (link)
	Just to be evil and nitpicky to all of you, each line of a haiku should stand alone and not be part of a larger sentence. Haikus are tricky Much more practice is needed You talentless louts (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)