ChelseaGirl (chelseagirl) wrote in writingprojects, @ 2005-02-04 18:22:00

Constructive criticism?
Candle flames flicker--
Dancing, sinuous,
Opium incense aglow,
There's an orange-bowl offering--
Seven perfect suns,
And wooden beads,
On a red string,
At the Enlightened One's bent knees,
As he stares--stone--into infinity,
The beating of his heart
Now one with the gentle cosmic hum
That I am so aware of,
In this moment

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