Hopelessly Romantic (materialgirl06) wrote in writingprojects, @ 2005-01-22 14:29:00

Current mood:	groggy
Current music:	Maroon 5

Newbie
True Friends

So you say you want a change
But you’re back to flirting with your old ways
Tainted seduction
Wrapped in miles of perfect self-destruction
Fawning over an intoxicated romance
As though it were the Angel of your salvation.
Words of unspeakable treason
Buried deep inside
Concealed by an artificial smile
As the music overlaps your intentions.
Go back home
Turn off the lights
And cry on the cold shoulders of your best friends
Jim, Jack, Bud and Bud Light.



---



.the fall out.


Slaughtered
By your hurricane
A sacrifice
On your altar
Captivated by a beautiful disaster
That defied all logic
Shredded my reason
Like sandpaper to chapped lips.


I’m bleeding
From my crucifix


And did you know your weapon was unexpected?
It’s unfair.
Because you can’t leave a girl so dizzy and spinning and grasping for a hold on the earth and expect her to catch her balance again.

But I must confess.

Vanity looks so good on you
Like yellow does on blue
One flash of that smile
Threatens your victims to shiver
Make way
Clear the streets

Get down on your weathered knees
Praise hypocrisy
Like your own personal Jesus
Light the world ablaze with your treason
And all hail the great pretender.


..Hola! I'm new. I decided to join b/c I love to write and I've always wanted to become a writer. So feel free to say whatever you want about my writing, as long as it's not too mean. :)

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