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look for the girl with the broken smile.. (my_wonderwall) wrote in writingprojects,
@ 2004-06-27 00:13:00
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    i just joined a little while ago- this seemed like a nice community, i've been searching for poetry/writing communites. i've been writing for as long as i can remember (i'm 16 now). here's something i wrote today..

    somehow my chest is chained to yours
    and it sinks with every word you say-
           tell me to leave,
           ask me to stay,
    feel my heart weaken with every day.
    you know i'm just your paper doll;
           i'm always bending,
           and slightly torn.
    just keep using me like your puppet,
    but my strings are becoming worn
    and my hands are getting stronger
    from this constant pulling at your heart.
    i've been working piece by piece
    and soon i'll have this to an art.
           mold your thoughts
           and mend your eyes,
           take away your subtle lies,
    get it to a science and then maybe this can start.


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