shit, this story is spiraling off into delicate, boring prose. I can feel it doing this, it's turning into something with pretty writing and not much else. For this one I know how it ends but I don't really know the point. Why are the character's motives what they are? Why should we care about this character?
Sometimes I feel like I have the ability to be a good writer but other times it's just struggling through some story I no longer want to finish. There are times though when the story I'm struggling through ends up selling, but it's impossible to tell.
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