|-|4lluc1/\/4710/\/5 (h4lluc1n4t10n5) wrote in poeticdevice, @ 2003-07-20 06:14:00

Current mood:	tired
Current music:	Nirvana-"The Man Who Sold The World"

Challenge
It's 6:14am...and I just discovered your community..so..my poem may not be too good today...for your 'challenge'...

Home
Home is where the heart is...
Looking around the room
Feeling somewhat lost and confused
You came..
Out of the darkness
Striding towards me
Extending your hand to mine
You came..
Calling my name
I listen with intent joy
As I near your arms Embrace
You came..
The warm feeling
Of your body pressed next to mine
Our breaths entwined together
You came...
Pure is the love that is felt
I have found my home in your heart
As my soul aches for the touch
You came..
Of your love...
Take me with you
Wherever you go
Together once more I dream
You came..
So I dub her my home away from home...
Again we grow..

Wow that's quite possibly the most retarded poem I've come to have written, but eh...whatever.

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