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I'm new. I love writing. Over the summer I had a huge writer's block. But about 2 months ago my friend told me to read her poems and I guess I just had inspiration and I wanted to write again. Anyways, this is one I wrote about 2-3 weeks ago. Tell me what you think.
Beautiful
I lay my head down
Across your cold chest
I listen to your heart beat
Oh, it's so beautiful
And this silly girl of me
Oh I dream of red roses
On my front porch steps
Oh look at you,
Look at what you've done for me
Sometimes I wish I never dreamt at all
So you could watch me fall
Right on my face
But then I'd wish you well
Because at those times I enjoyed your company
It somewhat doesn't make sense. I know. But I long desire for the feeling that so many people waste. That feeling so many people cherish and care for. I want to love someone.
-I don't even have steps on my front porch-
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