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shillelagh law (joneal) wrote,
@ 2008-02-10 16:30:00
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    Jim
    He hit the time clock looking half dead-
    disheveled hair, stained white tee,
    worn hound's tooth pants.

    "You're late again"

    I said, while thinking: goddamn,
    If I could only find another cook
    worth half your salt?

    Just one of many times I could've fired him.

    I am no pushover or sentimentalist,
    so there are a few things you need to understand.

    Old Jim was an insufferable drunk,
    relied exclusively on curse words to talk,
    gambled, lied and rumor had it,
    once killed a man in the pen,
    yet despite his faults

    he was a maestro when in the weeds.

    When the wheel was blooming tickets
    and the servers were screaming like banshees,
    he never lost his cool.

    It's not the point that I once caught him
    washing his pants in the dish machine,
    knew of his stash of Pabst in the produce cooler,
    turned a blind eye to his nightly dinner
    of broiler station scraps and that
    those, in actuality, were whole fillets
    and not even his habit
    of referring to his knife as his "tool".

    The point's that in all other respects
    he was born for the kitchen's hellish ways,
    the long, cruel hours on your feet,
    scorching heat of salamandered plates,
    desperate pleas for traction
    thrown salt asks of spilt grease,
    inevitable cuts, burns and falls,
    the sheer will it takes to keep your hand
    over a broiler grill when flipping steaks.

    "The breaks" had never broken him,
    so I let him saunter in like he owned the place
    but watched him like a dog
    that could turn on you at any time.

    What it amounted to was that Jim
    was an indispensable, son-of-a-bitch
    who if I gave enough rope,

    always towed the line


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