Emma (itwaswritten) wrote, @ 2006-04-06 23:30:00

this is the bit they made up

our father
who art in heaven
hallowed be thy name
thy kingdom come
thy will be done
on earth as it is in heaven
and give us this day our daily bread
and forgive us our trespasses
as we who trespass against us
and lead us now into temptation
but deliver us from evil
for thine is the kingdom
the power and the glory
for ever and ever
amen

this is the bit made up by me
you're not supposed to think it's the lord's prayer, but then when you look closely it follows the same kind of structure because basically it's a palimpsest of it. this is in no way related to religion. maybe love is my religion. okay maybe it is related to religion, in the way that love is in the place of religion. k here it is.

our husbands
and our wives, our heaven
love, we share the same name
our kingdom is betrothed
our vows, said and done
we live a heaven on earth together
regardless of when we fight
and we will always forgive them
but pray they never forgive themselves
when they are tempted
towards passionate evils
for they are our kingdoms
our love, and our heroes
for ever and ever.

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