steph (contemplation) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-13 20:07:00

the love of my life said something that sparked a poem in my head, so ill share


You still wont look at the stars
my stars
do they make you want to think of me?
is that what pains you love?
ah, the word
so simple
so clouded with meaning
meaning I have yet to comprehend
meaning you have yet to clarify
you say you feel
I know you care
but you still wont look at my stars


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