Broken Bones and Black Eyes (steamertrunk) wrote in emolyrics, @ 2004-01-13 17:38:00

Sorry for posting this twice but I messed up one word.

I wrote this recently and wanted to hear what people thought.

This Ruined Ride of My Life


I bite my tounge and pray for blood
To stream out my mouth
And form a crimson son
That lights up your life
and darkens your world
In the contrast of our nights
Broken glass doesn't hurt

Half as bad as I want to
When my bodies crashing through
This clumsy car windshield
Hatred can't be concealed
When my skull rips open
Leaving my thoughts revealed

Tell me this, does the pavement taste like heaven?
Because my teeth are broken and my tounge can't taste a thing
But it looks pretty good with my guts on it all crushed and severed
And broken bones have never felt better


Any thoughts?

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