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WeLcome To PaRadiSe (oddoneout123) wrote in emolyrics,
@ 2004-01-02 01:53:00
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    Current mood: uncomfortable
    Current music: Withered- A Static Lullaby

    Completed
    Ok Ok... this is what it is. Hate it or like it. Its a rough draft anyways. Just wanna know what people think of it.

    ________________________________________________
    You make the days oh so much darker
    And you make me think much harder.
    You make tears come out much more often
    And you leave the hole, far behind empty.
    A new hole,
    An endless, deep, painful hole,
    That was formed the day so said you didn’t care.
    The day that you told me that you just didn’t love me anymore.
    And I cried and I,
    Oh why the hell would I?
    Remember playing with your blonde curly hair.
    And remember sitting beneath the moon…
    Those nights on the cliffs sitting beneath our moon.
    It was our night, and it was our moon.
    When we’d speak of the things we hate.
    Do you remember?
    I remember…
    Remember falling in love>/s>.
    But I can think of a much more accurate word,
    Yeah a more accurate word was fell.
    Yeah, fell.
    Because you know that I’m still down there.
    Still in love. Still a dreamer.
    I still remember those nights on top of your car.
    Where we’d reminisce about the people who ruined us.
    About their cold, dark hearts.
    Oh how we hated them and their empty eyes.
    Remember how you said they made us who we are.
    Sinister, angry, depressed.
    They made us that, because of their selfishness.
    That which we are.
    Was made by them
    But look now.
    We were supposed to change.
    Because I remember,
    Oh I do remember…
    Remember hearing that love changes people.
    But when you told me those words,
    I must have misunderstood you…
    Because I could have sworn that you said,
    That you said we change for the better.
    Is that why I’m still miserable?
    Miserable the way I was before I met you.
    Because for some time there,
    Yeah for some time…
    I was complete.



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