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Kristie (she_burns) wrote in emolyrics,
@ 2003-11-05 12:50:00
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    Current music:SoCo

    stuff
    hey guys, this is a song I wrote sometime last month & I've been meaning to post it in here - it's one of my better ones and it's NOT your typical emo song.. think more along the lines of TBS- so I think you might like it..? Just gimme some feedback if you want, or read it and mumble it sucks, whatever floats your boat.

    Target Practice

    Switch to center
    An all-out battle (left me feeling right)
    Call me up the next day and tell me how sorry

    I look when I don't take you back
    Well I'm sorry, it took so long (for me to)
    Cause I don't look when I take you back
    You set me up again

    Roll out the red carpet
    It's the debut of my greatest mistake

    Yeah so what do you say to that
    Sweetheart you broke it (the worst it's been)
    I wrote it down three days later
    And you went down with what I wrote

    Ten forty-seven
    I called you just
    To hear you breathe and then I hung up

    My coat and called it a day
    Such a long hard day (left me feeling right)
    Yeah it's only morning and I'm calling it quits
    That call made me do it (I swear)

    Yeah so what do you say to that
    Sweetheart, you broke it (the worst it's been)
    I wrote it down three days later
    And you went down with what I wrote

    So you wanna see me smile? (ask me)
    Ask me if I care
    You wanna see me smile? (ask me)
    Ask me if I care
    I don't, I don't

    Roll out the red carpet
    It's the debut of my greatest mistake

    Yeah so what do you say to that
    I'd amaze you
    Just ask


    thanksya



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