nichola (death_wish) wrote, @ 2004-03-02 18:27:00

Hi I'm new here anyway here is one of the poems i wrote please tell me what you think

Severed Soul

My heart breaks
My soul shatters
Cold hard metal runs through my body
The pain like poisen in my veins
The crimson blood flows steadily
Trickleing like water
Down my arms down my fingers
Making a puddle on the floor
I'm going over the edge
I've been pushed too far
Blood spills again
Only fear can numb the pain
And that is what i lack
I'm already dead
Not hurting anymore
Just trying to free
My severed soul

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