death (angel of it) (deadman102183) wrote, @ 2004-04-05 11:28:00

tell me if this makes sense to you, Please
As I don this hood of darkness
Through this wretched stretch of serv-ed time
I think back to the greater startings
of this failed, futile time on earth

And the needless loss of love and passion
makes my sad eyes tear and water
when I see this horrid hate
Now is the time to move this show on forward

Into the glorious light we must go
for with this wondrous movement
we as a whole grow greater still
than the sun and moon and stars above

But into action we must go
If we ever want to survive this hostile
this pained and tortured living, must stop and never be 'membered
For if it is, then woe to all who are then forgotten.

just written

and tell me if this other one makes sense to you either

All i feel is cold and dark
not a bit of warmth in this frozen heart
for it is void of hate and love and any feeling
'sides of which worth of any appealing

There is nothing there, of which there was some to start
and nver do i feel any emotion
for this horrid world of which I'm part
that is why i care not much for forward motion

all around is stagnant quiet
so loud i can hardly think
It's sound so pressing on my soul
and the only way to stop it

Is to share yourself with others
To give of yourselves a part
then we'll see a subtle changing
In this world we all live in

what ya think, please send any opinion/feelings/comments/anything

if you like it or not share these with others, i wanna see what ppl think of them.
Thank you.

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