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dead-poet (dead_poet) wrote,
@ 2004-02-28 14:11:00
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    Current mood:artistic
    Current music:classical songs stuff

    Moribund
    Anyway, here's the next one. Though I never really refered to it as a story before. You guys be the one to figure things out.



    Moribund
    By Rychus Guanzon Cortina


    Blurred lines of light moving down...
           Voices, shouting at each other, some mumbling, some panicky...
           Swinging and creaking...
           The world was so fast I was being left behind...

    --oOo--


    I can hardly see with all the blinding light...
           Faces, lots of faces, masked faces all around me...
           Shadows abound...
           A monotonous beeping sound...

    --oOo--


    I can't see...
           Everything is white...
           Blanketed by a thin, silky linen...
           I'm so sleepy, I need to rest now...
           But I simply can't and I don't know why...

    --oOo--


    Mumbling of a muffled voice...
           Faces, more faces, moving sideways with nothing in their eyes...
           I ignore them all and go back to be blinded once more...

    --oOo--


    Still the muffled voice...
           A lady before me, sobbing, then bursting into tears...
           Was there something I said?...
           Sobbing...
           Whispers...
           A sudden slam...

    --oOo--


    Her voice was muffled with a sob from time to time...
           I can't understand any word or what was happening...
           But there was a tone in her voice that told me I knew her...
           But I just can't remember...

    --oOo--


    "I'm sorry, Josh; please forgive me..."



    Hehe, well that's it. Look out for "Faded."


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