Some Sweet Gravity (smeswtgrvty) wrote in beat_box, @ 2003-08-11 22:42:00

New to the community
Hey all I'm new to the community looking for some input on some of my poetry any criticism is welcome ;-) thanks


laying in your arms
feeling your body against me
i know that i'm in heaven
floating above the clouds
gazing into your eyes
seeing into your soul
i see all that you mean to me
your kisses, so perfect
your touch, so gently
is like that of an angel
you're my paradise, my utopia
being with you completes me
you're the missing puzzle piece
and you've made me whole

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